jueves, 15 de enero de 2015

Thesis statement and outline

Gun ownership should be forbidden because it causes a lot of crimes, increases violence, and takes children to a bad education.

I. Crimes are increased due to the bad use of guns.
   A) Killers use guns to kill people as if it was their hobby.
   B) Thieves use guns to get expensive objects for free.

II. Violence is used like the solution of any problem.
    A) A gun makes you feel self-confident to do actions with violence
    B) You can threaten somebody to do all you want.

III. A bad education causes mental troubles without solution.
      A) It could cause an unhappy childhood plenty of bad habits.
      B) It could create a person with mental troubles in the future.

If you don't want a violent environment around you, don't use or buy guns!

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